Selina Berrezueta 809
Walking to a fast food restaurant and have a big appetite. You order your food and sit down about to have one bit of your burger, but STOP! What you about to eat has a dark side. In the article "Fast Food's Dark Side" I will talk about what a burger have and what people think about it.
Did you know what a burger has in it? According to the article "Fast Food's Darker Side" The cheese is dyed with bamboo charcoal and onion-garlic sauce that has squid. Another thing is the beef patties is packed with black pepper.
What are you thinking about this whole thing about the "dark" side of a burger? Disgusting right? According to the article, it says "It might just be a little bit too icky" for the U.S says "But I would love to try it"
This quote means that it would be a risky to try a "goth" burger. Another quote is "Has Burger King gone goth?" This quote also means that after what they found what a "goth" burger has in it.
In the article "Fast Food's Dark Side" it talked about what a burger has in it and how people think about it.
Your use of a narrative-style hook really drew me in! You are a very strong narrative writer, and it was great to add some of that into your nonfiction.
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